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post #1 of Old 09-23-2015, 06:06 PM Thread Starter
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What you guys think of this AD ? Nice and simple for online marketing, Social Media, local newspaper, and magazines.


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Nice ad

Very nice ad - clear, attractive & well laid out. One little picky point: change the slogan to "customer satisfaction is our business!"It just sounds better imo. Great ad though.
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I think you are in a difficult business.... but that aside.... you didn't offer anything. Ok. so you have some cleaners..... lots of others do too and they are offering discounts.

Look at the ad and tell me what YOU, the maker of this ad... what draws your attention on this ad?
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What you guys think of this AD ? Nice and simple for online marketing, Social Media, local newspaper, and magazines.

Nice
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Very nice ad - clear, attractive & well laid out. One little picky point: change the slogan to "customer satisfaction is our business!"It just sounds better imo. Great ad though.
Very good point! Thank you
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Not a thing is wrong with it. It should bring in millions of dollars within the month. GREAT JOB!! One of the best ads I've seen in a lifetime!



If that's what you want to hear from someone that knows ads.... or you could listen to the others that can't even figure out how to make their own ad work.... you are the professional marketer.

Good job. You deserve a pat on the back and a raise.

What would I know? I've never made any money making ads
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It's good, but the line with "Searving the central coast..." flickers before eyes...Try to change the colors.
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post #10 of Old 12-02-2015, 12:53 AM
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Useful information you have shred.Thanks for sharing this.
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